Evaluation is too brief currently. You need to expand all sections, and finish it off. The camera section could be improved by focusing on specific shots and analysing connotations. The editing section needs to be developed further too. Embed critical theory links into your analysis and make more references to case studies throughout. Jo
Evaluation is too brief currently. You need to expand all sections, and finish it off. The camera section could be improved by focusing on specific shots and analysing connotations. The editing section needs to be developed further too. Embed critical theory links into your analysis and make more references to case studies throughout. Jo
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